any one interested
I know it's been said over and over (to you), but a couple things to consider (and I really am just trying to help you out here - no harm intended).
1) Use spell check, it is your friend. People tend to look into things more when it is delivered in a professional manner. Spelling mistakes and the like does not go very far when trying to sell a product. A thing as simple as right clicking that red underlined word will go a long ways.
2) Try posting some pictures right to the thread. Also try to get some pictures of fish with your flies in their mouths, believe me it goes a very long way.
Once again, I'm not trying to belittle you or anything along those lines. The past few years I have definitely figured out a few things to help me sell flies for a little extra spending $ in university. At the price you're selling them, if they are decent quality, you should have no problem getting orders.
Cheers,
Dan